The night comes when there are fewer days ahead than behind. On that night you realize the folly of your misspent youth was really the joy of your life's adventure. To that I raise a glass and say "Hell Yeah he really lived! Goodnight Dad
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oh Tate that sure is one of the best poems I've read as I love the song as well. Your words as usual penetrate the soul. Life is a journey, and we all may go astray, wandering in roads never taken before, or roads that were taken by others yet they seem so unfamiliar as we don't learn from others' experience all the time .... Lost hopes, sorrows and tears moan inside your heart only to awaken some hunger for a ray of light that would sure give you the rebirth feeling. No matter how long we try to hide from love, it sure finds a way to us, without asking for our permission. The wind, the sun, the spring and the storm ... all those words are only an excellent choice for the flow of your feelings that was easily sensed all along your poem ..... sorry it was too long but it sure hit me hard that one. Loved the photo toooo :D
I will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got m.. read moreI will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got my vote
10 Years Ago
How endearing to read such a devout write on a subject we both share thank you
10 Years Ago
No need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excell.. read moreNo need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excellent ink ...
there's an amazing feel you project from your expression...I don't think I've read a poem of your I haven't enjoyed
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Mary thank you from the bottom of my heart as i love this one myself I have been experimenting with .. read moreMary thank you from the bottom of my heart as i love this one myself I have been experimenting with video poetry of late and have created a few that i cannot describe but they make me feel so happy to post
oh Tate that sure is one of the best poems I've read as I love the song as well. Your words as usual penetrate the soul. Life is a journey, and we all may go astray, wandering in roads never taken before, or roads that were taken by others yet they seem so unfamiliar as we don't learn from others' experience all the time .... Lost hopes, sorrows and tears moan inside your heart only to awaken some hunger for a ray of light that would sure give you the rebirth feeling. No matter how long we try to hide from love, it sure finds a way to us, without asking for our permission. The wind, the sun, the spring and the storm ... all those words are only an excellent choice for the flow of your feelings that was easily sensed all along your poem ..... sorry it was too long but it sure hit me hard that one. Loved the photo toooo :D
I will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got m.. read moreI will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got my vote
10 Years Ago
How endearing to read such a devout write on a subject we both share thank you
10 Years Ago
No need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excell.. read moreNo need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excellent ink ...
Tate this is so peaceful and noteworthy. One takes life for granted so much. Your pieces always brings our hearts and minds back to tranquiltiy and life's truths.
....yep, I feel ya on this one....well done, well caqptured, well written.....emotion in flight.....life has a way of replacing those things which we have lost...=)
Your honest words glorify life with all the riches it is ever ready to bestow upon every living form! Just that we humans, owing to our extra intelligence, disregard these small colors of happiness, run after illusory gains, and in the process surrender these precious gifts of love, compassion, care and togetherness!
Your words are of a saintly nature, and I am blessed to be granted access to them! Thanks!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
nayan as always it is a great thing to be seen through your eyes My thanks to you sir
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