The night comes when there are fewer days ahead than behind. On that night you realize the folly of your misspent youth was really the joy of your life's adventure. To that I raise a glass and say "Hell Yeah he really lived! Goodnight Dad
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oh Tate that sure is one of the best poems I've read as I love the song as well. Your words as usual penetrate the soul. Life is a journey, and we all may go astray, wandering in roads never taken before, or roads that were taken by others yet they seem so unfamiliar as we don't learn from others' experience all the time .... Lost hopes, sorrows and tears moan inside your heart only to awaken some hunger for a ray of light that would sure give you the rebirth feeling. No matter how long we try to hide from love, it sure finds a way to us, without asking for our permission. The wind, the sun, the spring and the storm ... all those words are only an excellent choice for the flow of your feelings that was easily sensed all along your poem ..... sorry it was too long but it sure hit me hard that one. Loved the photo toooo :D
I will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got m.. read moreI will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got my vote
10 Years Ago
How endearing to read such a devout write on a subject we both share thank you
10 Years Ago
No need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excell.. read moreNo need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excellent ink ...
Such a soul seeping expression of words-I love the way you expressed the thoughts roaming through the head. I adored this line-“Give me life or give me rest"-It truly reach the depths of my heart and mind, causing a emphatic feeling with the character. Thank you for entering this into the contest. I enjoyed the read.
Nicely done as usual Tate. It's always a joy to read your works, they are so life affirming. Stark contrast to my own. I guess that's why I like yours so much.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Oh they are just meanderings of the worn mind I would trade you for some of your years lol thanks
I have missed your poetry, and this piece did not disappoint me! It has such depth of emotions that can be felt! Excellent poem
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you you guys are always more than welcome round me The door is always open and the light on fo.. read moreThank you you guys are always more than welcome round me The door is always open and the light on for you
10 Years Ago
You are welcome, and you will be seeing more of me! I have missed writerscafe.
Fantastic write, Tator Tot!... You always have such a touching message within your words. ~xoxo~:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Ah the beauty of the cafe how are you dear? Yours is a timeless face to look upon.
10 Years Ago
awww Now, you're not supposed to make me blush. lol ;)
Thank you for sharing your work of art,.. read moreawww Now, you're not supposed to make me blush. lol ;)
Thank you for sharing your work of art, my dear friend. ~xoxo~:)
10 Years Ago
you are welcome And you are worth it all of it the work the tears the hours the pain it takes to cre.. read moreyou are welcome And you are worth it all of it the work the tears the hours the pain it takes to create them
10 Years Ago
so true... all worth it!
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One day descendants will find your works online and if you're lucky they will say what a great soul... read moreOne day descendants will find your works online and if you're lucky they will say what a great soul.
10 Years Ago
yes, But they will have to be 18 and over.. ;) lol
10 Years Ago
hahaha Yeah Well if they are lucky they will say Damn I look just like her Real Lucky that is!!!
10 Years Ago
(hehe)... and here's hoping they will want to write too! ;)
10 Years Ago
I hope so I have to wonder if they will lose that ability in the future and with it the treasures
10 Years Ago
I know, with all the technology, now a days.... who writes anymore?... sigh...
I am loving the.. read moreI know, with all the technology, now a days.... who writes anymore?... sigh...
I am loving the old typerwriter, though...
10 Years Ago
oh you would love this Tom Hanks has started a new app called hanx app it makes the apple ipad like .. read moreoh you would love this Tom Hanks has started a new app called hanx app it makes the apple ipad like a typewriter and it sounds just like an old typewriter
Really?...cool! I will look into that...
I must go, Tator tot... will close my account for a b.. read moreReally?...cool! I will look into that...
I must go, Tator tot... will close my account for a bit...but will be back... :)
Enjoy! hugsxx
10 Years Ago
by dear be good or safe whichever suits your fancy lol
This poem is so beautiful. It's filled with love, longings, sadness, hope! BRAVO!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
It has been so long since last I heard from you i have to say i love it I think the last time i hear.. read moreIt has been so long since last I heard from you i have to say i love it I think the last time i heard from you it was on the poem Heart so long ago now Thank you say hi to your sister for me
10 Years Ago
I will say hi, and that it's good to be back! I am trying to be here more often!
I really loved this. I always wonder if I am wasting time or not in the journey. Your poem has convinced me I haven't been wasting time just becoming who I am. Great Poem.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you I am so happy to hear you got something of value from i Just live your life and smile more.. read moreThank you I am so happy to hear you got something of value from i Just live your life and smile more than you frown
I'll raise my glass with you, and toast the days fully lived. Without regret I'd do it all again. Although, I see an eternity of unknowable rapture lies ahead, with loved ones I have yet to meet.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Agreed I would do it all again as well thank you friend
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