The night comes when there are fewer days ahead than behind. On that night you realize the folly of your misspent youth was really the joy of your life's adventure. To that I raise a glass and say "Hell Yeah he really lived! Goodnight Dad
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oh Tate that sure is one of the best poems I've read as I love the song as well. Your words as usual penetrate the soul. Life is a journey, and we all may go astray, wandering in roads never taken before, or roads that were taken by others yet they seem so unfamiliar as we don't learn from others' experience all the time .... Lost hopes, sorrows and tears moan inside your heart only to awaken some hunger for a ray of light that would sure give you the rebirth feeling. No matter how long we try to hide from love, it sure finds a way to us, without asking for our permission. The wind, the sun, the spring and the storm ... all those words are only an excellent choice for the flow of your feelings that was easily sensed all along your poem ..... sorry it was too long but it sure hit me hard that one. Loved the photo toooo :D
I will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got m.. read moreI will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got my vote
10 Years Ago
How endearing to read such a devout write on a subject we both share thank you
10 Years Ago
No need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excell.. read moreNo need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excellent ink ...
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For the past fifty years I have lived a joyful, privileged life...with a strength hard to muster. I was determined not to ruin my life, but more than that, the lives of people that loved me and would have been destroyed, had they known. What I didn't know when I decided to suffer silently, is that I had and have the ability to to forgive,,,it is a gift I give myself. Details, I care not to share publicly....however, since I brought it up, you may inbox me....Barbz
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Barb You know we dont have to forgive so much as put them outta our mind erase them from e.. read moreThank you Barb You know we dont have to forgive so much as put them outta our mind erase them from existence as far as we are concerned that is how i get by
this poem really makes me want to live life to the fullest at my younger age, this was very nice and inviting thank you.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you Dillon live life to the most it can be when you are young. It leaves you great memories in.. read moreThank you Dillon live life to the most it can be when you are young. It leaves you great memories in older days and fewer regrets It is also good for marriage as you have no need to roam as you have seen it and done it all before .
The whole poem is like a song! Time past, but we never recognize it. Why? Because we never plea it.
I like your rhyming pattern and your song. Thanks for submitting.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you nice to meet you I guess it goes without saying I am a rhyme and meter poet
Sorry it has taken so long to review, I have lots of requests and I'm slowly dealing with them all. I love it, and that's not something I say often. Especially with poetry.
this is super splendid again...Oh Tate the past memories are always special and at such time what a person can recall...be happy and have a wonderful time...age is never a matter...don't ever lose the vitality... :))
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Anne As i get older I am forever longing for days gone by
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