The night comes when there are fewer days ahead than behind. On that night you realize the folly of your misspent youth was really the joy of your life's adventure. To that I raise a glass and say "Hell Yeah he really lived! Goodnight Dad
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oh Tate that sure is one of the best poems I've read as I love the song as well. Your words as usual penetrate the soul. Life is a journey, and we all may go astray, wandering in roads never taken before, or roads that were taken by others yet they seem so unfamiliar as we don't learn from others' experience all the time .... Lost hopes, sorrows and tears moan inside your heart only to awaken some hunger for a ray of light that would sure give you the rebirth feeling. No matter how long we try to hide from love, it sure finds a way to us, without asking for our permission. The wind, the sun, the spring and the storm ... all those words are only an excellent choice for the flow of your feelings that was easily sensed all along your poem ..... sorry it was too long but it sure hit me hard that one. Loved the photo toooo :D
I will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got m.. read moreI will sure vote for this one as all the rest can't even stand the level of comparison ... you got my vote
10 Years Ago
How endearing to read such a devout write on a subject we both share thank you
10 Years Ago
No need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excell.. read moreNo need to thank me, what touches the heart is what is based upon sincerity and truthfulness. Excellent ink ...
love, life, the living of it, the right and wrong, all epitomized in this, the third stanza is touching if only in it's simplicity, overall I loved it, great read Tate, paddy..
Ooooh I love this and what a sexy cowboy...looks a lot like you by the way. Anyway your words stitch with a skilled magical touch and one can find healing in them.
I'm with that Tate, the wonderful poem and the note that you wrote .. life!!
~~redzone
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you May we all stand against the gales of life leaving this world on our own terms when we are.. read moreThank you May we all stand against the gales of life leaving this world on our own terms when we are good and ready thank you
There is such beauty, emotion, truth and wisdom in this poem....so raw...so deep ..written in perfect rhyme and rhythm...it rocked and cradled my soul. loved your author's note...every single word speaks to me deeply. Beautiful and full of emotion. Loved it!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much I am Tate So nice to meet you .
i love it,i find wisdom in each single word you say,thanks for the lessons you give :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Nancy You suffer from the same affliction as i do the Romantic heart. May it guide you through your .. read moreNancy You suffer from the same affliction as i do the Romantic heart. May it guide you through your life to the place you call home. Thank you
Romantic hearts always look for the best in a soul when you cant find it then you know it isnt mean.. read moreRomantic hearts always look for the best in a soul when you cant find it then you know it isnt meant to be
10 Years Ago
a trapped soul inside a body :) can not wander or seek much
A voice like wind through hollow wood ... speaks of dreams forsaken in favor of a life with heart ... mind ... and the progeny of children. A life that is newly discovered of itself ... finds itself at home in the world. good job huckleberry.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Sri you have captured the heart of this piece thanks
lol We're beauty for a fleeting day
that fades with the loss of youth
Forget and may, u.. read morelol We're beauty for a fleeting day
that fades with the loss of youth
Forget and may, upon us weigh
the merciless pains of truth
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