Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[Barbara Walker]

Beautiful! Yes, life has so much more meaning when you are with the one "you are supposed to be with". It's a feeling like no other.

[Paul Okeke]

Tate morgan, tate morgan, tate morgan... Always seeing your poems,, ur name visualizes dat of an expert on dis site... U always write good poems nd always advice... U ar d BOSS... Good one

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Your rhyme and your couplet is nicely written, for the imagery it envoke lots of sensation where true lovers and love emerged together in one unbrella and without raindrop across the sky. It good.

[M.Babu]

"I would give to you the sunshine
a kind windy sun flowered field
Hopes to fill your hearts desire
with any dream your mind could wield"

Isn't love the goal of all this mess we call Life? That our time here has been well governed and will result in happiness, success and appreciation. We wish to leave our own, mark upon the world..but question is, will it be for the world to all see? Or will it be closer knit, with the family most importantly?

Beautiful read Tate.

~M.Babu~

[spiritwind]

This is the gorgeous kind of feelings every woman wishes to inspire in a man she loves. Most women want this kind of singular experience to the point we get all starry-eyed when we read such a paen to love and forget that supper is burning on the stove. Excellent poem, excellent love, my dear friend Tate!

[poeticpiers]

Obviously written by a man who appreciates what he has.
My beloved and I ceebrate eight years in december but in truth it feels as if we have always been together.
A safe haven after some turbulent years. Sincerity shines in your words. ivor

[Manvi Dev]

I really enjoyed reading your poem, as it kind of reminded me of what true love is. It was a really heartwarming poem and could feel the emotions.
I hope to read more from you.
I also hope that you both be together for a long time!

[The Refined Poet]

this is such a heartfelt and lovely poem. You definitely displayed the depths of your feelings and emotions here.

[Mockingbird]

sublime imagery that truly expresses the love you share. i also believe that when two people are meant to be together their essences will come together. this is a special poem. thanks for sharing.

[Mic]

Lovely words for a lovely lady... and you're both very lucky to have each other, Tate. May it last the lifetime!

Very well done!