Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[Damien Davison]

I want to quote the whole poem, but that would be pointless. Amazing work, Tate, it shows how much you care for her, it was really touching. I hope my baby mother and I, I hope our love could match something as powerful and amazing as what you have. Great write, it was beautiful!

[Lilly]

You can feel the love you have for her in this Tate. It is an absolutely beautiful and romantic poem from a brilliant writer!

[M. Kari]

Very sweet your love shines ♥

[Allen Smuckler]

You are such a good writer it hurts....Tate
Always the amazing imagery and talented texture..
You have a distinct way of saying everything you need to say, in the most concise way. No wasted words and no verbosity. It is always clear what and why you are writing..
Once again my friend
a beautiful write
allen
lovely pictures as well...you are both lucky souls.

[Becky C Strukamp]

So true the words of this poem and Allen you summed this up best, there's never a doubt of Tate is referreing to or composing, his words cut straight to the heart of the readers.

[Tate Morgan]

I don't know how to answer that but to say thank you. I am as common as a weed! Hence what i write is always in the peoples language short concise and to the point. I cannot think abstractly. So I find i am at a disadvantage there. I hope top simply touch another where they live and breath. Thank you

[Becky C Strukamp]

You're welcome! I have a hard time writing abstractly therefore my writings are from life experiences as well.

[Tate Morgan]

I am terrible at it and I hate to do it Because i embarrass myself with my ineptitude

[Becky C Strukamp]

I doubt you could do that Tate! You are very talented and it shows with everything you write, the way you display your page, and your humbleness!

[Tate Morgan]

I was telling Quinn I wasted many a year hammering away at life.But when the only tool in your toolbox is a hammer Everything begins to look like a nail lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, a heart's blood unveiled...with such passion.

beautiful words, a love like this is priceless..and comes along once in a lifetime.

only one suggestion..the title should be "Your Dream's Desire"

[intuitivesoul]

I have someone I would say the same things too. Very enjoyable!

[Mary]

Beauty, deep true love, a beautiful gift to Rebecca

[Patricia B. Hepler]

A wonderful tribute to your special lady...

*pat

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

These kinds of feelings being expressed cant help but make one smile inside.
Your happiness has touched us all. This was an experience I am thankful to have
been a part of.