Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[M. J. Smith]

Silver tongued devil... 🙂

Who spoils who? :))
I'll never be quite that romantic. Not quite in my make up. I believe in and enjoy true love. But for me words aren't entirely trustworthy. Actions speak louder.
Still, very beautiful words to a wonderful woman.

[Tate Morgan]

I’m never alone Thanks to her. And being alone is the one thing I can’t stand

[Einstein Noodle]

she is a beautiful woman Tate! i am sure your poem gave you her smile :) very romantic ... soft and warm
E.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Gene. She is a peach I’m sure I don’t deserve her

[SM Davis]

lovely photo. perfect meter.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you SM. I’m glad you like that my wife’s kind of fond of it

[¿]

Love's smell I smelt, love's felt....while I was reading your poem....
May all the envious eyes and gaze stay away from your love...Do give up everything for her...but think twice when it comes to life cause she might always fear losing you, no? ;)
And I've heard that blue eyed females are destined for fortunate men...I know you'll keep her safe and loved! All the best wishes to you lovely couple....Enjoy!💐

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Tahsin I have had the best 9 years of my life these last 9 with her. She looks the same to me as the day we met.

[¿]

Mmm hmm...and thousands of best years of your life are next! You're welcome =)

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you so much

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Tate... The warm rain... sweet songs the
whippoorwill sings... A wonderful Valentine
poem for your sweethear... truly... Pat

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Patricia it is a good day to be in love

[MomzillaNC]

A timeless Valentine's Day gift

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you Momz I am a happy lucky man

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. I wish for everyone the kind of enduring love you and your wife have found and continue to grow together.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you It is a great feeling to know you are not going to face life alone

[MomzillaNC]

It truly is a blessed estate.

[Jamestown]

Wonderful write again my friend just great, and I believe your words,thanks for sharing.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you I have now 15 poems to becky and counting .If this keeps up I will have to write her a book

[timthy]

Another great piece by one i consider the master of his craft. Everything you write is a must read!

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you tim

[Dominique Lambright]

This is very sweet and heartfelt, I like :)

[Tate Morgan]

hi Dominique you romantic you thank you I like this too as it is sweet to my girl and i live the song thanks

[Dominique Lambright]

lol youre welcome...you always express so much love towards her in your writing :), it is very inspiring to want something so nice

[Tate Morgan]

she deserves better than me But I shall stay so long as the winds of fate allow

[Dominique Lambright]

well that is good as long as you both try that is all that matters :)

[Tate Morgan]

Oh we love each other we are best friends we share everything

[Dominique Lambright]

Thats awesome. My parents were best friends since they were 10 and have been married 22 years :)

[Tate Morgan]

we are as well

[Dominique Lambright]

I want my future marriage to last as long and longer lol

[realmwriter]

I agree with Rick Puetter. This piece is certainly you.

[Tate Morgan]

Hey Derrick hope alls well with you man thanks

[realmwriter]

All is well, well, you know, there is life in general and all the B.S. that goes with it but nothing to get me down. I trust by this poe, all is well with you also.

[Tate Morgan]

yeah i am well glad to hear you are too