Lost Friend

Lost Friend

A Poem by Arielle Hill
"

It hurts when you think you and your best friend are in something together sharing a bond, but end up feeling like that bond never happened or you been betrayed long ago.

"

A Poem For You

(Lost Friend)

 

I didn't lose her physically,

I lost her virginally,

It hurt me to my heart,

That she's no more kin to me,

 

One day she was here,

The next day she was gone,

She was my close best friend,

Now I feel so alone,

 

I can't describe the feeling,

From when I heard the news,

It's like morning on the grass,

All that's left is the dew,

 

It was fuel to the fire,

When the hipocrit came,

Gave me a name?

Now our friendship's in shame,

 

She can't get it back,

There's no way no how,

The terrible of the tragedy,

It's hanging off the brow,

 

Secrets hid behind,

Heart in pieces of crumbles,

The symphony of joy,

Notes of friendship tumbles,

 

Blessings comes with patience,

But not anymore,

The purest of the white,

Is the rotten in the core,

 

Our frienship,

Is not going to be the same,

Don't know what direction it's going,

It doesn't have a name,

 

You been had it in your heart,

There's no telling how long,

So that tells me,

Our frienship has been gone,

 

I'm going to miss you,

But it wasn't real,

I could have saved my breath,

But this poem is how I feel.

 

Peace.

10th or 11th grade

© 2011 Arielle Hill


Author's Note

Arielle Hill
It reads down just like it's order. I just wanted to spread it for the creative of it. (smile)

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Thank you Neva! This was a hard time for me when I wrote this. She was considered my best friend. But nothing was ever the same after that. But this comment means alot. I really appreciate it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I remember these days. How friendships changed when one decided to grow up too fast or lost their innocence in their own home.....wonderfully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Arielle Hill
Arielle Hill

Montgomery, AL



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My name is Arielle Hill and I am 22 years old. I'm multi-talented but my one goal is to become a singer. I can write poetry (on different subjects), rap, and dance. My sports are basketball, volleybal.. more..

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