Maddness

Upset and you need to release a few things... (laugh)

A Poem For You

(Maddness)

Filled with anger,

Filled with rage,

Sometimes I feel I can't go to the next page,

Orange to red,

Fury of fire inside,

Feel like strippin' somebody's ride,

Do you understand what I'm feeling inside?

I don't think you do,

Stick wit yo pride,

You stuck up and got an attitude?

Don't play with me,

Cause I'll get rude,

When I fight,

I wanna make you bleed,

Just to send a message,

Not to mess with me,

Might be slim,

Might be kind,

Don't let the skirt fool you,

Cross the line and you'll see another side,

I can't hold it for long,

I gotta let go,

Cause my heart and my mind has to flow.

9th grade

Reviews

[Praiser]

Real talk, A poetry rapper to AMEN VERY NICE

[Arielle Hill]

LOL! Thanks Todd! Really appeciate it. I love all my work, because not only it's about fun, but observing the build and growth of your skills. I laugh back at some of my writing as well. (laugh)

[J Todd Underhill]

Being as this was written from the mind of a 9th grade this is not such a bad write. I look at the stuff I wrote back then and think I didn't know what i was doing. I rarely post things from that far back so this took courage!