My Loving God

My Loving God

A Poem by Arielle Hill
"

Loving on God for everything he's done in my life and more. As long as I got Him in my life, I'm good. (smile)

"

A Poem For You

(My Loving God)

God,

You are my LIGHT and my SHINE,

For you forever,

I will NEVER comprise,

 

I might get along,

And tell a few jokes,

But when it comes to you,

Nothing is a Hoax,

 

The devil tries hard,

Trying to destroy me,

But as long as I got YOU,

He CAN'T even TOUCH me,

 

My mind and my heart,

ALL belongs to you,

This body that YOU created,

LOVELY & TRUE,

 

WHENEVER I'm hurt,

And lonely in my days,

You're always there,

To take the pain AWAY,

 

So this poem here God,

It goes straight to you,

From your DAUGHTER,

I LOVE YOU.

 

9th grade

 

© 2011 Arielle Hill


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Thank you for comment Praiser! I'm grateful. I love God so much. He's all this and more! When I wrote this my thoughts were directly to God and wanted to put it down. (smile) Glad you like it. (smile)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very Beautiful
The way your words give a compliant to God
From another Level, only your Spirit knows
This is more then what see and read


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

275 Views
3 Reviews
Added on August 27, 2011
Last Updated on August 27, 2011

Author

Arielle Hill
Arielle Hill

Montgomery, AL



About
My name is Arielle Hill and I am 22 years old. I'm multi-talented but my one goal is to become a singer. I can write poetry (on different subjects), rap, and dance. My sports are basketball, volleybal.. more..

Writing