Feelings+Emotions=Complete (Part 3)

Feelings+Emotions=Complete (Part 3)

A Poem by Arielle Hill
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3/3 poems. This is the finaly of her journey with this boy. Things are looking up for this girl. She finds out that she looked at things wrong all along, followed by a happy ending. (smile)

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A Poem For You

(Feelings + Emotions = Complete)

 

You came of to me,

Rapidly my heart beats,

My soul burning inside,

Waiting for you to swoop me off my feet,

 

The blood in my veins,

Is running luke warm,

Seeing you sparkle,

With your touch of charm,

 

You tell me,

You've been wanting to speak to me for a long time,

Then I said to myself,

Now I know you're going to be mine,

 

He said he looked away,

Cause he was nervous for me too,

He said I was so beautiful,

And suddenly I wasn't blue,

 

Palms are so sweaty,

It's so hard to breath,

But I could breath his air,

For he inhales with ease,

 

He ask me for us to be as one,

Now we are complete,

My feelings plus my emotions,

Has completed me.

9th grade

© 2011 Arielle Hill


Author's Note

Arielle Hill
The order of poems for this:
1. Feelings
2. Emotions
3. Feelings+Emotions=Complete

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Added on August 26, 2011
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Arielle Hill
Arielle Hill

Montgomery, AL



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My name is Arielle Hill and I am 22 years old. I'm multi-talented but my one goal is to become a singer. I can write poetry (on different subjects), rap, and dance. My sports are basketball, volleybal.. more..

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