Blame to Change

Blame to Change

A Poem by Arielle Hill
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bascially this describes how you feel when you blame yourself on the results of how things are going in your life, but you want to change it and make it better including with God's help.

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A Poem For You

(Blame to Change)

 

Silence fills the room,

I feel empty inside,

I feel like two worlds of mine,

Are going to collide!

 

It’s my entire fault,

I blame myself,

If I look around,

I can’t blame any one else,

 

I feel like an eclipse,

Moon moving in front of the sun,

Knowing one thing about all this,

My work is not done,

 

I call on God,

Please help me!

Show that I’m trying to change,

I want to show you in me,

 

I want to come out of school,

Then start my new great life,

Crazy devil trying to hold me back,

Trying to cause me strife,

 

I’m not going to let “it” do that,

I’m going to keep standing strong,

I want to live the promises of God,

So that I can live long,

 

Everything trying to come my way,

Do you know the pressure?

I will always make it through,

God’s love is my hearts’ measure.

 10th grade

© 2011 Arielle Hill


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Arielle Hill
Have you ever felt like this?

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Added on January 29, 2009
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Arielle Hill
Arielle Hill

Montgomery, AL



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My name is Arielle Hill and I am 22 years old. I'm multi-talented but my one goal is to become a singer. I can write poetry (on different subjects), rap, and dance. My sports are basketball, volleybal.. more..

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