LAST NIGHT OF A PROSTITUTE

if this i could do, would i not a best person?

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04 July 2010

Zahid from Pakistan

 

Last night of a prostitute

 

One night physical love,

With a prostitute of little worth

Who doesn’t possess single but many hearts

I learned reasons why to love?

 

I never thought of being in love

It wasn’t even forced upon me

To love a call girl in call world

She taught me how to love?

 

She served me with a cute smile

A smile covering a fear behind it

Fear that will ruin her flesh and soul

Though yet she was smiling at me

 

She had nothing cooked for my eating

She had her body to serve my thirst

She knew I will destroy her parts

She knew I don’t care any disaster

 

Yet she was smiling

Yet I see her happy face

Yet her face was bright

Yet no sweat on her body

 

Before I start making love with her

She said, “Pay me thousand this time!”

“Then I’ll be with you for more over a night”

Simple words but I heard them for the first time

 

It was my lust that had made me blind

Now I was able to see behind that smile

She was crying and shouting from inside

She was requesting me to do but nothing

 

I paid her thousand and stepped back to back

She got astonished when I left her untouched

I left her call house and came to the road

I felt her standing behind me in her door

 

She has been looking at me for a time

I did not turned back to see that house

I could see others who made love with her

Just for some silver coins and nothing else

 

I hear, “Come back Zahid don’t go now”

“Come back and take me with you”

I could not help looking back!

I saw her; she is still standing in the door

 

I took one stepped toward that prostitute

She started running towards me

Now she was away from that call house

Now she was in my arms without my lust

 

I took her to my home that night

That was her last night as a prostitute

Now she is Zahid’s soul’s spouse

She stopped selling herself in call house

Author's Note

do tell me if any problem is in this work please

Reviews

[Savanna Lee]

This is beautifully written, but there are a few grammar errors you might want to look into.

[Poliester]

I really enjoyed this poem. The style is unique and the way you dealt with the content was very tasteful. One thing I noticed is that the poem switches from past to present tense, and sometimes it is done in a poetic way, but sometimes I'm not sure if it is intentional. Then there are just some verb conjugation errors, but they add to the feeling of the poem. Thank you very much for posting!

[Loner]

Heart felt poem with many facts and innocent love.

[eighwoeifj]

Nice work. To many, this is a touchy subject, you either go one way or another, but the way you wrote it, it really makes you think about your own opinion of it.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you've taken a painful subject matter and rewrote it with heart and gentle care~opening the woman most only see as an object into a beautful human gem with heartbeat and soul~ well related write~