PLACES OF MY VISION

i wish i would have places like this, after reading this, hope you will wish too!

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04 July 2010

Zahid from Pakistan

 

Places of my vision

Put me in your pocket

Take me away from here

Where there isn’t envy

No greed no worries

No love that demands reasons

 

Keep me in dark filled safe

Where there are no warms

No mouse to pieces me

No cruel air to lick my words

No water to thin my blood

 

Write me in a justice book

That is not practiced in courts

Nor in poor public cases

That is not in law bookstalls

Nor in divine books of false Lord

 

Hide me somewhere in a forest

That has green and angle shape trees

Small leaves but provide best fruit

Where there beast may also present

The beast those have no jaws to eat

 

Toss me into a river

A river of silent mood

That kill me without fuss

That return me not after my death

Where fishes food my flesh

 

Better build a castle around me

A castle that hasn’t doors in it

Nor windows, nor ventilators

A castle that is like a grave

Where I’ll able to sleep forever

Author's Note

if you find any problem do tell me about that in my this work please.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exquisite rendering of deep disdain with modern day human failings drawn through a world peppered with mythos~memorable!~

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job, that's what writing is all about. keep on writing.

[Faye]

I saw it as a being trying to find peace.

[Loner]

Wish we really had a place like this . Good thoughts

[Zahid]

love and care for you Zahid