Six Word Memoir

Six Word Memoir

A Poem by Ari
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Hopefully, this one will be joined by others.

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You don't win, yet.

I endure.

© 2008 Ari


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Wow. I loved it. I love how you put so much meaning and emotion into so few words. Short, sweet, to the point, and beautiful. Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I l ike that! You're one of those poet people who never give up. I am that way too!

Sal

Posted 16 Years Ago


Simplicity is the most challenging art. To convey a lot of meaning with a lot of meaningful words is challenging, but common. To convey so much with but a few well chosen words, is profound. Language is funny that way! ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


People don't realize how hard it is to write something meaningful and powerful in such few words. You did it beautifully and I hope you can write some more of these.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow. This punched me in the face.

In a good way, of course.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ari
Ari

Lexington, KY



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I'm a fifth-year college student in Secondary English Ed, and I love writing (obviously, or I wouldn't be here). I write mostly poetry about my life, but I know that poetry isn't my strong point, so I.. more..

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