Pride

Proud

That’s what we are

Until the end

Forever true

Every soul

And mind

Our rise

And fall

We all have it

We all feed it

Till in the end in destroys us

Reviews

[Louvegrise14]

I love the last few lines "Our rise And fall" and "We all feed it until it destroys us." Wonderful illustration of the concept and what it does, I can only wish I could write like that. Amazing job!

[Arianna Dean]

Thank you so much. I never had any training or anything all you have to do is figure out what you want it to say and then re word it with different words until you get what sounds the right way for you.

[Louvegrise14]

Aw, thank you for sharing the tip :)

[Arianna Dean]

Your welcome.