She Fell

She Fell

A Poem by Arianna Dean
"

This can mean everything and anything. Listen to it and feel what it says.

"

She fell down

Down to her knees

 

Begging them

Asking them

 

Stop

Please stop

That is all she asked

 

But they do not listin

The never have

 

They just keep on

Knowing

But not caring

 

What it did to her

Laughing at her

 

She cries

As she falls to the floor

 

She is giving up

Letting them have their fun

 

Silently

She cries

© 2013 Arianna Dean


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Arianna Dean
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This screams rape to me :( due to her helplessness, the group around her, and her begging them to stop.
Still, good job conveying something like this in so few words, that shows talent :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arianna Dean

10 Years Ago

Thank you! I wrote this a few years ago and for the life of me I can't remember what I based it of o.. read more
Louvegrise14

10 Years Ago

Haha I can see why

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Added on December 19, 2013
Last Updated on December 19, 2013
Tags: pain, stress, misery

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