hell in my eyes

the life i have came to isnt home

the world is a nightmare

haunting me

burning in my heart

god has turned his back

look around

the black in my heart

isnt going to change

the pain burning

deep down into my core

is almost gone for good

this is not a home anymore

                                    

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

having experienced sorroundings as you describe~ I can understand the profound emotions at work throughout the poem~and relate to the mood intimately~ well expressed emotions through the poetic form~

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god--what sad mood here...well written-
and well expressed---great poem!!!:-)

james:-)

[arianna]

ok

[Spencer Hoadley]

you know me. i dont lie

[arianna]

watever its bad

[Spencer Hoadley]

wow, great poem =)