What is love?

What is love?

A Poem by Imelda Blackheart
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This is for a contest that interested me enough to make me write something to enter in it.

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Love changes.

You believe love is foolish.
Love is ignorance.
Love is suffering.

You realize that love is never silent.
Love is… strange.
Love is powerful.

You come to realize that love is boundless.
Love is unconditional.

Love is forever.

Love is what you feel towards whoever changed your mind.

© 2012 Imelda Blackheart


Author's Note

Imelda Blackheart
I had to work with fifty words or less (this is fifty words exactly, by the way) so it might not be as good as what my poems usually are.

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I like how you put the three phases of how people view love. The first phase was that nobody believed in love, the second phase was the first experience of how love can be, the third phase someone who believes in love and feels it's extraordinary effects. Nice write, keep it up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Imelda Blackheart

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!



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"Love is what you feel towards whoever changed your mind"... I do agree with yer this line. It's a nice poem and i loved it. What exactly a love's you've well penned up the words into the piece. Whatsoever a love does imply .. you dropped here a piece of love, the explanation of love and so on. Am gonna save this poem into my folder and gonna keep it in my library as well. I'm thanked you made this piece. Brilliant job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imelda Blackheart

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It always makes my day to hear that someone was inspired by something I wrote. :)
Cool. I like that you don't need to be mushy about a topic that so often is...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You did very well with the short poem. I like your description of love. Love is hard to control and can be lost by wrong action and misused words. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Its simple and nice. I would agree with Grant P. The final line is completely agreeable. Love is what you feel towards whoever changed your mind.
Love is never silent but it can still be speechless ;)
A good masterpiece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece takes into account different view points on the topic .... I loved the way it is drafted ..... It sort of ascends the point view somebody who does not believe in it to the view point of some one who it means the world ....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Imelda Blackheart

11 Years Ago

I'm pleased that you were able to see clearly the different point of views that there were- that was.. read more
I like how you put the three phases of how people view love. The first phase was that nobody believed in love, the second phase was the first experience of how love can be, the third phase someone who believes in love and feels it's extraordinary effects. Nice write, keep it up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Imelda Blackheart

11 Years Ago

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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Added on December 28, 2012
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