Cries of a Broken Heart

Girl, i guess i could tell u this.

You told me you'll love me forever

Promised me you'll never leave me

Pledged you'll stay till the end

Vowed you'll never look for another one

 

I trusted you with all my heart

Loved you with all my being

I believed every word you said

Tied myself with all your words

 

But what happened my princess?

Your promise is now broken

Your pledge is over

Your vow is gone

 

You looked for another one

Made you fell for someone else

Let your care be felt by the new one

Leaving me behind without any word

 

You wasted my love Honey

You threw away my heart Darling

You discarded my feelings Dear

You betrayed me my Lady

Reviews

[S.R. Madeline]

I like how each line starts similarly and each stanza has its own purpose. It flows nicely.

[Maya]

I love this poem, its very deep. Its refreshing to see someone else go through something similar to what I did and know I'm not alone.