You Make Me

you let it all be known

and happily i could die

you wrapped your heart in ribbon

and here is my reply.

 

this is me to you

this is in exchange

for how you've complemented

a life once so plain.

 

for all you've given

i've recieved much more

words couldn't describe

taken steps; opened doors.

 

if nothing more you give

i know i have your heart

in return i give you mine

and that's but the start.

 

i want to give the world

i want to keep you out of harms

i couldn't list all i'd give

to keep you forever in my arms.

 

this has been my heart

it's yours; i'll stay true

to sum it up in just three words

I LOVE YOU!

Reviews

[S. C. McDaniel]

This was very sweet! I thoroughly enjoy your writing!

[R E Tree]

This is a pleasent and beautiful read. Saying thank you to someone shows how polite you are. Saying thank you to someone can really enlighten there moods and it makes them happy with you. It is often very rude not to say thank you. Overall this is a sweet and cute poem

[Miss Coral]

Very sweetly written... I love the subtle rhyme scheme. I holds together your words perfectly, without ever dominating them. Great piece, altogether.

-Coral-

[Lachenille Papillion]

Beautiful sentiment, nice rhyme and rhythm. well done.