Kismet

He saw in her eyes

dark brown,

mystified blots

which sparked life

everytime they blinked

engulfed by white

serene oceans.

A place of tranquility

where thin crimson rivers

ran across

both these lands.

He surrendered to kismet.

- C Kumar

Reviews

[Insight "MH"]

A well-penned poem with strong Imagery. You have made a world of many features from a small place, this is called genius.

[Chirag Kumar]

thanks Insight! :)

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome ^_^

[SSAgnihotri]

Touchy one indeed

Regards,
SSA

[Chirag Kumar]

Thank you!

[ms. barrie]

gorgeous imagery, that speaks of divine love...
Thank you for sharing (:

[Chirag Kumar]

Thank you Barrie!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, Sir (: