Masked truth

He celebrated for he was a father now.
But only she knew the truth.

C Kumar
22nd August 2015

Reviews

[Briana]

While this is well conceived it's a couple words over the limit. I might suggest dropping "for", making the first sentence two, and then dropping "but" before the second sentence. It keeps your story exactly the way you want it while getting you down to the 12 word limit. Well done!

[marcus]

short and powerful! Good one!

[....................]

some things can only be celebrated in solitude...well-done, Chirag