Meandering streets

Meandering streets
Ignite ordeals of my downfall as if
Trapped inside the walls built by myself but
Ashes of past grit invade the pale veins
Love for conquest shuns inhibitions rooting within
I ain't quitting you Life.!

- C Kumar

July 24 2015

Author's Note

I wrote this for a very special friend who has guided me and encouraged me to write poems. A small gift from my side :)

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Its so sweet of you Chirag. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece. Its indeed a treasure :) God bless

[Chirag Kumar]

God has blessed me already for giving me such a wonderful friend :)

[B]

Life has so much to show us
Hidden in each bend is a moment of magic
You just have to keep your will to stay curious alive always

[Willard Wells]

No matter the issue or subject, never give up, but stay focused on the brass ring. Well done.

[andrew mitchell]

A life is a journey for some a rough road others a smooth ride!

[wordman]

life isin`t a bed of roses

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
life can be a pain in the u know what sometimes but
we must go forward, well put" life I'm not quieting you"
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chirag Kumar]

Life itself is suffering as per the Buddha JT :) But its up to us how we perceive it and stand against the tides. Thanks for the review :)