I have written this poem in relation to the Vyapam Educational Scam in Madhya Pradesh in which over 2000 people are allegedly involved. The startling revelation is that around 50 people linked to this scam have lost their lives out of which half of them have died under mysterious circumstances.
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I can only review the poem on it's own merits as I am not familiar to this scam to which you refer.
I can feel energy in the poem that needs to be controlled while the reader is looking over your work. To do this, you need a softer font overall and some well placed punctuation!
Very well write friend.
Some scams bring down the Indian reputation. It is one of them.
One side a leader want to brighten the country, but some another leader not standing with him.
It is best realistic write friend.
I love this form - easy to read - I like the rather 'final' flow - if it can be described in such a way - great use of words - all right where they need to be (except for that in front of Karma - not sure its needed - such a non word I think).
The outline of this poem can be applied to many things in life - I like the way your mind works :)
I can only review the poem on it's own merits as I am not familiar to this scam to which you refer.
I can feel energy in the poem that needs to be controlled while the reader is looking over your work. To do this, you need a softer font overall and some well placed punctuation!