Rhythm

Reside Recline
in me in my arms
so that you feel
my heart.
Its art
of throbbing faster
whenever you come close to me.

Annoy Agitate
when we are together
so that I get
deeply sad
feel bad
and say sorry
so you know I care for you.

Cherish Childish
moments of sheer love
so that I get to
tease you
please you
with my antics
and make you laugh like hell.

Detach Despair
from pages of life
coz I am there always
for you
with you
for you're mine
Till the end of the world.

C Kumar

Reviews

[Vishal Suthar]

That line ..moments of sheer love...overall nicely structured giving perfect epitome of How much I care for you...

[marcus]

The rhythm of love..sounds good

[andrew mitchell]

A moving piece of pure devotion.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Andrew :)

[Mayank]

nicely expressed, good write...

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks brother :)

[Saddam]

coz I am there always
for you
with you
for you're mine

It is warm and beautiful bro.
Got it love it.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your appreciation Saddam :)

[KWP]

love the last stanza ...we get too caught up in all else and forget that life and love is right there in front of us - nicely done X

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks KWP :)

[Perkele.7885]

This poem shows that your love transcends all moods and heavy or light spirits all that life will take you. The true definition of love.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for the appreciation Raj :)

[Robert]

The longing for someone that you miss and love, a very touching and tender piece.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your kind review Robert :)

[Willard Wells]

Another lovely poem of words of love. Very nice writing. You seem to be in the mood for love today. hahaha

[Chirag Kumar]

For a poet every moment of life is romance ;) thanks for your review :)