First love

Plenty of flowers under the sun

But no match

for that special one

whose fragrance swept me first

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

You cannot go wrong with an orchid, ever! That would be my choice. A nice post, by the way!

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Raj :D

[Debra White]

Hi :)
There's nothing quite like the feeling of falling in love for the first time. The metaphor in your poem illustrates this beautifully.
Nicely done :)
Kindest regards, Debra

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your kind review Debra. The intensity of the first love is unmatchable. :)

[Debra White]

You're very welcome :)