First love

Plenty of flowers under the sun

But no match

for that special one

whose fragrance swept me first

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lovely. Finally someone who actually read the contest rules. Lol. Anyways, to the poem. The imagery is nice, the feeling is delivered perfectly. Priceless creation. 100 points. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

One suggestion...next time join the required group, in order to submit, and for me to accept your submission.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Danny :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Robert]

Chirag, dont we all have that first love and first loss of love. It never escapes our minds and memories. Understandable once you have that first love nothing ever compares.

[marcus]

Very beautiful, I liked it!

[Deepak Sharma]

Short but enough to explain

[andrew mitchell]

Fantastic clever words as you are swept away by love!

[Mitali Shah]

Love, flowers and that special moment describes it all :) loved it

[KWP]

yeah crazy how that happens isn't it ... once you get a whiff you find yourself entrenched ... love XX

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
short sweet and to the point:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Willard Wells]

That's how it is for love with the right one. Others may not understand, but something about that special one, that makes us fall in love. Nice piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Willard :)

[B]

I believe we fall in love with our noses lol

so i say the perfect lavender scent is the perfect setting for the mood