March Ahead

Gloomy scenes everywhere 

Spirits down with despair 

Scars seem beyond repair 

Life is just not fair. 

Troubles running hell loose 

Mind plagued with nervous issues 

No sign of peace or truce 

Life tightening the pressure screws. 

But you need to take a chill pill 

coz time wont act as per your will 

might be difficult but be relaxed 

you 're looking way too much taxed. 

But nail this thing in your mind 

that this world wont be kind 

you need to put that baggage behind 

and march ahead determined. 

 You're losing your precious moments  

The moments in which you can smile 

and enjoy the freedom every while 

while keeping your problems at bay 

breaking the cocoon of dismay. 

Feel the feeling of being liberated 

and watch the euphoria within unabated.

 So be unabashed and march ahead 

For many such battles you shall head 

where you'll face the demons and curse them 

get loads of wounds and nurse them. 

Realise that the time is now 

Forget the past and rise somehow 

Wake up from the sleep of sorrow 

and march ahead towards a bright tomorrow...

- C Kumar

             29th May 2015

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Forget the past and rise somehow
Wake up from the sleep of sorrow
and march ahead towards a bright tomorrow...
No matter how life shows you its bitter side you can always learn from it and kill the sufferings with your strong will, courage and your sweetness. :) Good one Chirag. Life goes on...

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
Solid message with great flow,
the last line says it all for me:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Jamestown. I appreciate it :)

[Perkele.7885]

Wake up from the sleep of sorrow! This line covers it for you! A good line!
*I will say this as a gesture of warning. It is not necessary to use foul language in your poetry for any reason that I can see!

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your feedback Raj. I will make the necessary correction :)

[Willard Wells]

I think your "Chillin" covers it all for this. Life goes on and you need to step back and enjoy pleasure where you find it. No matter the issues, life goes on day after day and we have to find our way no matter what. Nice flow and content. I liked it.

[Chirag Kumar]

Thanks for your review Willard :)