Eternal Struggle - A Haiku

Allah give me strength!

Eternal Struggle

 

Forever passes

God, give me strength to struggle

A labor of love

 

Reviews

[Angel Bird]

Only a few syllables to make a profound prayer! Wonderfully done!

[Micheal Teal]

Simply brilliant. The thoughts that it creates are swirling in my head looking for a home. It is my struggle that has made me strong. There are those seeking to reach the top of the mountain , however my mountain has no peak , because for me its the climb.

I have not only the strength to struggle but the wisdom to see beauty and knowledge in your words.

Bravo!

[lori c]

wow, so much comment of life in so few words. desires and goals obtained without struggle are like penny candy for the soul, sweet at first bite, quickly devoured, and leave us with nothing more than hunger pangs for another taste. that which we passionately struggle to obtain is truly soul-satisfying. loved this.

[E. M. Murren]

This is a special treat of a haiku. It is a mediation in fact. Well done.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

This haiku feels parallel to mine. I remember how you told that you weren't the best at haikus. If it means anything, your haikus are absolutely great, especially this one. Keep up the amazing work! ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Antony]

What is life all about? unless we have a cross to bare. Eternal struggle is indeed a labor of love. It gives us purpose.

[Jenny Davis]

I so love Haikus so I had to check this out...very, very profound write, my friend :)

[Bubo]

Very in depth for such a short write. Should love be a labour to struggle?

[Brenda Sue]

So true. Wonderfully written and to the point. Great job.

[mattavelli]

This is a good one. :)
Take care.