Me And My Girlfriend...........

A basic relationship ..... a little bitter and lots of sweetness"

"Me and you, you and me, is what love is all about"

She says this and stops my world 

She loves me, of course, a lot, I know

Me? Is that even a question, she knows

And so happily ever after does even exists

For me, for her, for me and her together.

But then she is attractive, captivating, magnetic

of course it's her, she is enchanting

enough to make me panic if she is with someone

anyone, no one for her, but another one for me

"Should I worry? of course not, she loves me"

just as I think this, nervousness takes me over 

"Why is he caring for her? I should be the one doing that........."

Only me no one else,  and its jealous turn to take me over 

tired of all such feelings I confront her, 

"I only want to be the one for you, caring you, loving you,

adoring you.......is it not enough?"

She looks at me, smiles, hugs me and replays,

You are the only one, you are my home

People will come and go, be my friend and foe, 

infatuation and love may tag along

many may fall for me, I may fall for some

But there is only one I'll love the most

Much more than anyone, everyone, more than me 

Just like a home I'll always return to him, with a certainty of

"Me and you, you and me, is what love is all about"

Saying this she stopped my world again

disappearing those vague emotions into thin air

I know now, I love her and she loves me more,

no wait I love her even more

and there is a happily ever after, after all

for me, for her, for me and her together and only together.

Author's Note

A little push .... a little pull..... childish and intimidating..... jealousy and a bit cheesy...... isn't it what spices the love between two? Serious at first but when we look back these are the only moments which make a love story's memories full of happiness....


also trying to adapt a new style.....so plz help me by reviewing it

..........hmmm trying to feel the same.........hope this poem reminds you your sweet memories of being loved...and helps you create more...........

Reviews

[Terry O'Leary]

Love is many splendored...
nice, moving poem!

[Archana]

Thanks Terry.....

[siddhi]

okay this is soft , etheral ,true feelings that arises in life ,one feel that is it true that can love be so deep so it is true .

[Archana]

Thanks siddhi....

[Bear]

For me it is always good to see a writer try new things, stretch themselves and develop new writing muscles. You picked the right topic to write about as well for love is infinite in its possibilities, a person could write about it their whole live and never need repeat themselves.

I found the first stanza witty and cute, the second stanza the nature of the poem changes and it becomes questioning and uncertain, I like that the mood change from stanza to stanza could be felt. From there on it becomes a little to sweet to me, it would have been interesting to have seen it go through the different stages of relationship woes. All in all a good job I am giving it a rating of 80 :~)

[Archana]

thanks bear......that was helpfull

[wordman]

lol,this brought back a lot of memories for me,great write

[Archana]

thanks Wordman........