All I Need Is You!!!!!!!!

"To show our deepest love to a person....we just need to make them realize that "All I need is you.............nothing else"!!!!!!!!!!!!! "

Can you hear my heart beating for you?

Can you see my tears shedding for you?

All I need is you in my life, besides me.

No one else but only and only you.

All I need is just you.

 

Why are you making me go crazy?

Why are you making me cry more?

You get close enough to hold your hands

And then disappear suddenly like the wind 

Standing alone, waiting for you again

When all I need is you, just you.

 

Do you remember our memories?

Do you feel a bit of love for me?

 If you don’t know, let me remind you

I’m still thinking of you, standing still where you left me

Hoping you’ll come back and take me in.

Because all I ever need was you

Just you, only you, no one else, but you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Sometimes....just a few words without any context, can express the most complicated feelings in the world!!!!!!!!
Words as simple as "All I need is you".

.......Trying to achieve the above............hope you like it.

Reviews

[J.Michele]

Oh wow I love this poem. It seriously should be lyrics to a song. It is so powerful and true, the words are just filled pure honesty. :)

[Archana]

thanks Michele

[Tej K]

Ouch, It's always hard having these type of unanswered questions. You've done well portraying the emotion in this poem.

[Archana]

Thanks Tej

[Willard Wells]

Third line change "Besides" to "beside". the lint "You get close enough to hold your hands", I feel needs work, but I was did not have a good suggestion. That being said the work is yours and it is all a matter of what works for you. My suggestion are my opinion only.

This is a very lovely piece and the flow is wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

[Archana]

Thanks Willard

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That is love in simple words. You described it precisely, all we need is that one person & nothing new. It's Amazing!!

[Archana]

thanks Sky.....

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend :)

[Chirag Kumar]

You're madly in love I guess, Archana :D The words speak of the girl's limitless love for him. Beautiful.!

[Archana]

Love is all about being mad ....isn't it Chirag.....Thank you....please read more.........

[Chirag Kumar]

You're welcome

[sarik]

I can feel your words and am dying to hear more Miss

Its a kind of addiction.. I read it again and again ..

loving it

Thank you for the beautiful lines Archana..

I hope in the next part you get what you need..

[Archana]

I already got what I need..........A review ! lol..... but thanks for loving my poem and reviewing it...........

[sarik]

Well, if it is so then Its a kind of honor for me..

At least I worked

[siddhi]

yes and iw will also like you to read my peom spring meadows and feelings

[siddhi]

this time i felt that the repetations make it sound better i liked it and will like to read more thankyou for inviting me to read
and yes i truly agree to your note

[Archana]

Thanks Siddhi

[Bear]

I like where you are going with this poem but I am also reminded of the other side of your poem (and I love when a work of literature makes me think). Love is not guaranteed, fate has a hand to play in any relationship. Also you cant force someone to love you just as one person cant love enough for two, unrequited love turns to contempt with time. See, now you have me thinking about writing something on unrequited love so thank you for that, it says you did a great job with your poem :~)

[Archana]

Thanks Bear...

[wordman]

lol,dam girl ,i am packing my bags now! on my way

[Archana]

Thanks Wordman.......

[wordman]

you`re welcome!