Pain In Heart!!!!!

"Trying to represent pain as an entity....so that we could mold it."

Just like any other morning, I woke up today,

everything seems the same except, you were away.

With a much heavier heart, than yesterday,

my eyes filled with tears, with your thoughts again today.

It's already been a year but they still torture

with the days passing by their sting hurts more.

Grief and sorrow have become familiar,

causing the mental agony, no longer bearable.

What is this feeling I wonder, 

simply tormenting, like black skies and thunder.

Scared and tensed, I sealed every corner of my heart,

but it still pushed its way in, as if it's its fort.

Just like water in an ocean it behaves,

unable to quench a thirst, all it has is strong waves.

Strong enough to suffer and drown you in it,

even with an arduous struggle, you can't win it .

They say time can heal this feeling,

it doesn't appear to be true, I've stopped believing.

All time could do is help me learn,

to tame this emotion and smile in return.

With no other way to stop it, I've to sink in it, 

only  then can I swim to the surface of it.

With so much suffering, it comes along,

accompanied with  hope's silver lining, and make us learn.

Loneliness, misery, heartbroken - name it as you want,

It's  simply PAIN, is what I understand. 

Author's Note

A new poem............hope you like it!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Tej K]

This is a good one! Thanks for sharing.

[AaronFreitas]

Very nice work Archana :)

[Insight "MH"]

With no other way to stop it, I've to sink in it,
only then can I swim to the surface of it.

The wording here is so beautiful, I got goosebumps. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem.

insight.

[Archana]

Thanks Insight for your kind review...... those two lines are my fav too ......... I think for a person to overcome pain....he/she should understand what it is in depth......then only they can find hope to overcome it.

[Insight "MH"]

So true, you must understand pain to overcome it.

[Insight "MH"]

And you are welcome.

[Bear]

As someone old and a sufferer of many different kinds of aches and pains, I can tell you that over time they do take up an identity of their own. I have been tempted many times to write something about pain but the inspiration to do so always seemed to painful to think about Ha! Ha! The emotional side you have well covered the physical side not so much, so maybe you should title your poem emotional pain. Nice rhyming scheme and wording choices, some philosophy and a touch of writers magic thrown in for spice and you have a very nice poem my friend :~)

[Archana]

Thanks Bear........and changed the title!!!!!

[Bear]

Nice title :~)

[Archana]

Thanks again Bear!!!!!!!!!

[wordman]

loved the write! full of emotion and pain,something we all feel in our lives.

[Archana]

Thanks......!!!

[siddhi]

a one more good peice but first 4 lines rocked

[Archana]

thanks siddhi