Just a Moment

A moment is all we need to change the course of our lives

Just a moment is all that takes,

To change the course, the life makes.

Like riding away the dark night in the skies,

It takes only a moment for sun to arise.

With the scorching sun over the head,

It takes only a moment for the shadow to spread.

In a moment the cool breeze blows,

Making us feel the repose.

All it takes is a moment to change, 

For one's thoughts to rearrange.

Only a moment, some sort of,

Will make you fall in love.

And just a moment  of distrust,

Will dissolve all the love into dust.

Just a moment endows so much power,

You can achieve or lose all that you desire.

Just a moment is what one needs,

To feel the beauty around one's deeds.

To live the life in just that moment

Is for what ones heart should be open.

You never know what comes next,

It's just that,a moment simply shouldn't be vexed.

As all it needs is just a moment, for a new life to be born,

Or in just a moment, this pristine life would be gone.

Its just a moment, after all,

Sure we can withstand its fall.

Author's Note

My new poem .......Hope you like it!!!

Reviews

[dexterous sam]

i always love to read that kind of stuff where there is imagery lies along with instant ideas imploring from the bucket of writer ....you are extremely good....:))

[Archana]

Thanks Sam !!!

[Adam Adams]

Brilliant. Very creative, & of course, a beautiful spirit you're seemed with words. You certainly smell quite good. I guess, the poetry's all 'bout "love" that makes your evocative mind lost somewhere into the dune of your own mysteriously miserable labyrinths... to take you to nowhere, but right to the beats of heart. Sometimes, it's kinda hard choosing the right track in love so sometimes, ... was easiest to walk 'pon, but whatever it is, I believe, "Just A Moment" is everything to have spirit swagged ov'r the passage of ecstasy brought by love-vibes to life. Very wonderful and deep poetry you've come up with!

[Archana]

Thanks!!!!!! Still want to improve with words.....

[Adam Adams]

You're welcome!! Oh, you still want to get improved? I wonder, but why? You're already well designed and shaped by the blessings of God... aren't ya? Lol . . .
Never-mind, well . . . you're seemed a very good learned and of course very passionate 'bout literature. I'll try to give my best to make some typos (that and if you make in your upcoming writes) to make 'em in your concern and blah.. blah.. blah. However, your "English" is very good, no doubt. You touch the heart with the simplicity of your words, So have at it and yeah... if you really want to get improved more with words then take a look at another typo that, am sure, you've UN-INTENTIONALLY made...

"To feel the beauty around ones deeds."

You may use "ONE'S" rather, "ONES". However, "ones" is already looking good but I guess, here in your poetry you are talking 'bout particular person, 'bout your lover or friend... Right? So, I believe, you may use "ONE'S". In case, you are talking 'bout more persons or lovers in your poetry that let it be as it's: "ones". Decision's always up to your sweeten heart.

[Adam Adams]

You're welcome!! Oh, you still want to get improved? I wonder, but why? You're already well designed and shaped by the blessings of God... aren't ya? Lol . . .
Never-mind, well . . . you're seemed a very good learned and of course very passionate 'bout literature. I'll try to give my best to make some typos (that and if you make in your upcoming writes) to make 'em in your concern and blah.. blah.. blah. However, your "English" is very good, no doubt. You touch the heart with the simplicity of your words, So have at it and yeah... if you really want to get improved more with words then take a look at another typo that, am sure, you've UN-INTENTIONALLY made...

"To feel the beauty around ones deeds."

You may use "ONE'S" rather, "ONES". However, "ones" is already looking good but I guess, here in your poetry you are talking 'bout particular person, 'bout your lover or friend... Right? So, I believe, you may use "ONE'S". In case, you are talking 'bout more persons or lovers in your poetry that let it be as it's: "ones". Decision's always up to your very heart.

[Archana]

I'm overwhelmed by this comment but I believe I still have to improve a lot.............

[Adam Adams]

Why do you saying it allot and ov'r and ov'r again? Aren't these yous poetry posted on the site? *Kidding*

[Archana]

I originally thought that line was meant about more persons but now that I see, it gives more meaning to the poem if it's about a sibngle person ....so i believe I should go with ONE'S

[Archana]

Ya they are my poems but see one more set of eyes and thoughts give it a different meaning .....isn't it??

[Adam Adams]

And, that's what perspectives are 'bout.
You'll meet. . . see many kinda persons across the webs even you meet many types of persons in your daily life.. Right? Some are meant to be hurt you, some soothe you with love, some jealous of you, some might want you to not to see what you have to, some ain't even want you to grow well, some ain't want to hurt you so never tell you what you "need" to be heard and blah.. blah.. blah... but in b/w that, you forget that, what exactly you want .. ?? What exactly you need to get cheered up? Okay, only a "smile" everyone does need to get started up with an every hum of morn. Right? but as time goes on, nothing seems to be alive. So dear, you shan't worry of what others tell or write 'bout you, you just believe in yourself, no matter how bad, good, worst and excellent you write, speak and live.. in your real nice beautiful life. If you have some faith even in yourself, noone can steal it from you. Hell, no one can even steal your very smile off of you. Okay? Just have some faith in you and see how FAST you conquer the world.

As long as am here, you are here and we're here... am pretty sure, i'll give my best to bash your heartbeats with creativity so as you could get explored with anew beam of lit.

And yes, dear... poetry has many perspectives to be shown but it ain't matter what others perspective's 'bout, what all does matter is ... what your real nice perspective says ov'r the channel. So always write away, no matter what others says to you. Only positive words keep deep in your heart and get learnt .. & the rest of the words spoken by others ... ah..let 'em rest well in the cane of bin.