Double Notes

Don't you forget about me.

     revel  in   the  hush

     oh                 my

     perfect  little  girl

     they             will

     bury             gods

     with             only

     your             song

know that        i was not

the first        to try it

Reviews

[LJW]

Ok, so WOW again. Most attempts at playing with form fail, at least in my opinion, as in epic fail. For me, the text has to hit just as hard without the form.
This text does. "They will bury gods with only your song" Beyond excellent. Goosebumps on my arms excellent.

You can write because, I sense, you don't really write at all. You are a channeler. 100/100

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Very clever, excellent my friend.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

haunting melody reverberating stained glass souls~

[ju]

either i'm seeing things or this poem is picture perfect. love it.

[Emily B]

it has a melody that sings

very clever