Revengineering

The shape was an excuse to use the line, which I removed a poem that didn't deserve to claim it.

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If
all of us
stand in a
circle
we'll
each
have
a back
to stab
V

Reviews

[arbitrary jane]

i've been trying to find an excuse to dip into concrete poetry. curse you for doing it first. and better.
love the twist of this too (pun intended... i do that.) how it starts out all 'lets all hold hands and sing kumbaya' and ends with ... communal shivving.
whatever that other poem was, it's totally jealous of this.

[JewelsGold]

clever, unique and revealing. Sweet Revenge indeed.

[Tommy]

I don't know if it is just my demented mind, but I see a phallus here, not a shank...Seems we all are crying rape in some sense or another, as we bend over and bare our asses...I have to say, you have me thinking on this one...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

wow, thats really clever.

[zig]

for some reason i see a dagger, heh, very cleaver my friend.

zig

[Lilly Negoi]

excellent! and it fits indeed the photo.

[OT]

ohh yeah I wonder if it came from ouroboros? ha that's how I see this - the circle collapsing in on itself!! love the line!

[M Baker]

Simple. Direct. Excellent. It is particularly fun to reread it numerous times using a different voice or placing alternate inflections on specific words each time.

[ju]

oh i like that.
next time i'm on the recieving end of some idealist preachy cr@p that line'll cross my mind and save me like nothing else can ;)

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

*grins* i love it.. elegant little work..