Between the Lines

10% poem, 90% gimmick

i f - a l l - y o u - e v e r - d o
i just wish
i s - r e a d - b e t w e e n - t h e - l i n e s
you would listen to me
i t - d o e s n t - r e a l l y - m a t t e r
sometimes.
w h i c h - w o r d s - i - c h o o s e - t o - w r i t e

Author's Note

I wrote part of this in invisible ink. Highlight the text to reveal it.

Reviews

[roarke]

I guess then it's all left up to whether you double spaced or single spaced..... invisible ink tends to create more questions than it answers....

nice concept.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

whar an absolute wonder of a poetic puzzle~ i've never seen this done before~ not just creative~ but complementary to the theme~

[AnythingPink]

Playfully creative and unique within it's own simplicity. I enjoyed.

- Pink

[Emily B]

MacLeish said a poem should not mean, but Be. I like the gimmick and the words here. Made me smile.

[Saraplenty]

Highlighting would require too much effort.

I like meaning what you say.