School Bell

About waiting for that last school bell to ring and set you free.

Wait for the ringing,

Wait, wait, wait,wait,wait,wait,wait.

The bell is freedom.

Author's Note

This is my first haiku and something I wrote waiting for the bell to ring haha. Is it as silly as I think it is? Can you guys relate? haha

Reviews

[Alexis]

Yes, I can totally relate lol. I feel this way at the end of every class period and the end of the day. I don't know, I just don't like sitting in school. I completely get why it's important, but I know that I won't use everything I'm learning. Yeah, there are some classes I really enjoy like chemistry, but they're just not necessary lol. I'll stop ranting now. Good poem! :D

[Imara]

Thanks! I agree, sitting there just makes me really jittery and I just want to move around even more. And on a side note, you're good at chem? You must be a genius because I'm a slowly dying in that class haha. Thanks again for the review!

[Alexis]

Yeah, same here! The teachers always expect students to just sit there forever and we just can't do that haha. Well, I don't like to brag and I'm rather modest, but yeah, I'm good at chem. I had a really great teacher. You'll get it, though! I have faith in you. :D It'll all be good in the end. And no problem! You did an awesome job!

[Imara]

It's the worst when they try to make you stay after the bell, "The bell doesn't dismiss you, I do." One time I told my teacher, I was having a bad day I'll admit, "Well jeez if the bell doesn't excuse us why the hell do they have them in the first place?" We can leave it at she didn't like that XD and Modesty is a fine quality hard to find. It's difficult but if other writers can understand it I'm sure I will. Haha

[Alexis]

When they say that, my blood boils. Lol. I don't blame you for saying what you did. They abuse their "power". I know I'm supposed to respect them, but it's really hard when they pull crap like that. And you will understand! :D Lol

[Imara]

Haha it makes it so hard to like them! Luckily it's not all of the teachers or I would just lose it.

[Alexis]

It does make it difficult. And yes, that's true lol.

[fireblossom]

It isn't silly. Well sort of silly...in a nice silly way of silliness. There is an interesting tension and release going on too.

[Imara]

Haha I'm glad you take my nonsense seriously ^^

[Rita L. Sev]

I can absolutely relate - teachers await that final bell with as much anticipation as the students! A clever Haiku!

[Imara]

Oh thank you! I'm sure they do haha but I'm still under the impressions teachers live at school XD

[Amy Tao]

I can really relate. :) Waiting for the school bell to ring when classes are boring and there's nothing interesting to do. It's not silly :D.

[Imara]

Haha thanks, I'm glad that I'm not the only one out there wondering why time moves slower as soon as I want to get out of school