Wrist Scraper

my first one ever

why are my lips so cold?

where did you go?

why did you leave in the middle of all the joy I ever had?

why can I still taste you're lips?

were I that cursed to lose you?

were you that strong to leave?

did I ever asked too much?

did you ever miss me?

yeah I know you did babe...

I just feel so alone...

I'm too tired...

I'm too dead...

and I still don't ask too much

I just want what I had

but I'm too tired...

I said I couldn't live without you and I didn't

they want me to stand still,you know what they say...

but I'm too tired baby

I'm too tired and I gotta go

I'm too tired of bleeding

but still...

I gotta go....

Reviews

[Jessica Samuelsen]

Well Congrats on your first writing... I think it's very raw and that takes a lot of courage to be so open... I like that there are so many questions in the beginning... I felt very keenly the sense of loss which you seem to portray here. It's a good piece especially for your first one

[Kenneth The Poet]

Thoughts so dark, thoughts so dreary
Making my eyes so wet and bleary

My soul is aching for release
My life wanting pain decreased

And so I place the barrel so cold
Against my temple, a move so bold

And now I say goodbye to all
And I make the hellish fall

[arash.suicide]

i agree,it's my first writing ever so tnx for that

[Satchmo's Gal]

A little repetive, but alright. it needs a little something to make it memorable