Lonely Little Figure

Small story I wrote while sitting in a hotel room.

See the pretend stars in the hopeless city? Such ignorance man has to
the godly sky. Thinking power emerges from ignoring the angels that are
weeping with neglect. But on the corner of a tall, man-made structure
sits a lonely little figure. Quietly she watches the Normals go by and
dare not let their dull eyes look into the abyss. What would they see
anyway? The electric stars drown the twinkling eyes of their ancestors.
The lonely little figure grins at the stupidity of mortals, who think
the only way to solve a problem is to look the other way. Man's life is
in the form of blood. The blood is the life. Yet, they do not know how
precious it is to the lonely little figure. She knows the secrets of the
mortals and their other lives. The Senator and his affair; the Writer
and her infatuation with death; the Drug Dealer and his profit; and the
Lawyer contemplating suicide. Only the worthless lives she must take.
What would man's world do with a life planning the murder of the next
businessman who decides to walk down the dark alley or the rape of a
broken, homeless teenage girl. She secretly walks the streets, blending
in with the mortals and pretending that she is not what she seems.
Acting innocent as her prey stalks her. So apathetic to the cares of
others she drinks their souls and frees the world of growing evil with
no recognition for her. So the lonely little figure keeps watching the
people from the tall, man-made structure. Watching to see if they dare
glance at the concealed stars.

Reviews

[Abeer until dawn]

Your creative write is burning with emotions and feelings to unleash ... it portrays a harsh reality that exists behind the so called society !

[Aradia Lecrawe]

Thank you. I just wondered if people who lived in large cities realized what there is outside of their boxes.

[Abeer until dawn]

I guess most of them are busy with what's inside their boxes .. They just need to feel settled, no bothering with what's outside their comfort zone ...