Jaded

October 01, 2016

Can you imagine
Floating between air and water
Maybe you can't
I hope you can
Because I'm letting go
And I will end up drowning

Author's Note

Just one of my few random thoughts...

Reviews

[.]

A thought indeed.

Caught between two places leading to a sense of exhaustion and resignation. Hold ourselves up between the layers or just let go and drift to the bottom?

Short, but interesting.

[Aprille]

Thank you. It's been three months, still jaded, still floating.

[Einstein Noodle]

that's so cool!!! and so jaded ;) ... love the places of in between!
E.

[Aprille]

Thank you so much for appreciation. :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoyed looking at this, clever, emotional idea, well put together.

[Aprille]

Thank you so much.

[wordman]

lol,i have been jaded all day,great write

[Aprille]

thank you. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

which is something i think of sometimes...when we get jaded, we expect the worst...

we could rise...but instead we drown...ever wake up with that feeling of drowning...just below the surface, just can't quite reach it, but it is so close.

[Aprille]

I'm a bit late though but thank you, thank you so much. Wrote that poem last year,still feels the same 'til now. *sigh