One Winter Night...

Play the music, start reading at 2:00 ;-)

Dark sky

Cold winter night

Like a menace,

I stumble, through the shadows of the pines

 

Fog’s eerie mysteries

Floating above the frozen sea

The wind sings to me

the notes of broken melody…

 

Snowflakes falling down

Catching the rhythm of the tears on your face

Oh how I wish…

to wipe them with my hands

 

Once white snow

Slowly turning into blood of sorrow

 

I hear your voice

Calming my soul…

“I need you. Please don’t go…Please…”

Author's Note

I've never seen winter, all is my imagination. I'm creating a story out of this poem... Reviews are very much appreciated. :) -olive

Reviews

[Confuser]

It is beautiful, so full of passion, and sadness and honest emotions. Thank you. Great writing.

[Aprille]

Thank you so much. :)

[Confuser]

You are welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Beautiful poem yet so much sorrow. An incredible piece of music too.

[Aprille]

Thank you Ana. :)

[Saddam]

Tragedic one................. But a very brillient way write.

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a sad piece that makes the heart quiver and ache.

[Aprille]

Thanks for the review. :)

[R Smith]

Hi Olive, welcome to the Cafe and you kicked off in style, beautiful poem, perfectly written :)

[Aprille]

Thank you Sir. :)

[wordman]

i guess love and loss go hand in hand,welcome aboard

[Aprille]

Thank you.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[stars are far]

that was very beautiful work.. :)

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the tone of the poem. Gentle words requesting someone to stay. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aprille]

Thank you Coyote. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

Very emotive write, filled with longing and a sense of loss. Evocative lines: "Once white snow;
Slowly turning into blood of sorrow"

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[DJ]

Winter can be a beautiful chilling thing,see it once if you can.
Haunting imagery.

[Aprille]

I'll love to see winter. :)
Thanks for the review.