Lavender Sunset

the lavender sunset a month ago just caught my attention... :)

Drenched with invisible tears

They couldn't see, I was breaking painlessly…

Had been raining lately,

I thought it would stay ‘til infinity

When I unveiled the windows,

the blissful breeze whispered to me,

“Look up to the sky, you’ll smile”,

A scene… rare and captivating

So rare that everybody was smiling,

My heart was so glad seeing people looking up

It seemed like the Owl City’s Vanilla Twilight

I left my poem of loneliness and sorrow

Can’t finish that piece anymore, even for tomorrow

I regret nothing ‘cause I found something...

A ray of lavender touching my face

I wasn't born under a world of sadness

I was born under a beautiful sunset

Somewhere, someone created a mirror for His lavender field,

To share the joy He sees while walking happily

Thus created a vast sky of masterpiece

It was not the end, it was a glittering sunset…

 

And that was the day I was captivated,

by the bright, lavender sunset.

Author's Note

I've been gone for a while, starting again with this poem enveloped by a lighter mood. I will gladly accept suggestions. Hope you like it. :)

Reviews

[Kieta!]

I love sunsets :) Great job!! :) :)

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Tricia Pattinson]

Captures the emotional switch quite well. Keep up the wonderful poetry.

[Aprille]

Thank you so much.

[DJ]

A melancholy,yet uplifting work,nicely done.

[Aprille]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is fine. I like the journey into good thoughts and places.
"I wasn't born under a world of sadness
I was born under a beautiful sunset"
I like the above lines a lot. Your strong description took me to beautiful visions and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Aprille]

Thanks for the review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"A ray of lavender touching my face
I wasn't born under a world of sadness
I was born under a beautiful sunset"

Those lines stood out from all in this wonderful poem...:).......

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome:)..........

[Lyn Anderson]

I like this, though for some reason, I did not take it as light, but rather somber and thoughtful. One thing, I think you meant can't finish, not finished.

[Aprille]

Thank you. :) I just feel lighter while writing this poem maybe because I was literally crying. (laughs)