Shattered

September 1, 2014 12: 30 am (Philippine time)

I

I’m made of wounds

And covered with scars

I’m of broken pieces

patched into place

Break me again and again

Breach my will

Crumple the stillness of my dreams

You've just awakened a heart of steel

Dauntless, vindictive, unforgiving...

Author's Note

This is just the part 1, hope you like it. :)

Reviews

[Dayran]

A poem in search of meaning ... amidst the attachment to promises and the realization of the truth. Nice ...

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Mayank]

Intriguing so far... let's see what comes next!

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting, so far, some nice images. However, I do think you meant "awakened"

[Aprille]

Thank you KL. :)

[Tricia Pattinson]

Powerful imagery and you use one of my favorite words..."Dauntless"

[Aprille]

Sounds like "Divergent Series" but I also like that word. :)

[Frieda P]

You wield a mighty sword butterfly warrior. Slay those krakens. :)

[Aprille]

Thank you for the review. :)

[Jack Wolfe]

Battered, broken, and repaired; the adage 'pain is only weakness leaving the body,' comes to mind. The 'I' makes this a proving ground, because only so much abuse, torment, and hurt can be achieved, before the 'I' chooses to STAND, and when that happens they become untouchable. Well done, Olive.

[Aprille]

Thank you so much Sir for the great review. :)

[Matching Socks]

Feels like a woman scorned.
Nicely done Olive, look forward to part two.

[Aprille]

Thank you so much.

[MomzillaNC]

Someone… the narrator of this poem… has had enough and is ready to choose better.

[Aprille]

The narrator is one fictional character inside my head. ;) Thanks for the review. :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.