Good Evening and Good Night

2009

A starry and moonlit night…

This is such my dreamy way.

The moonbeam is attracting,

to my pale eyes, widening.

Lying on the grass is refreshing,

staring way up the stars brightly shining.

The wind is blowing,

hugging my pinkish cheeks.

Water running downstreams,

music to my ears.

Gentle swaying of the leaves,

with their shadows blending the sound of hooting owls and crickets,

saying…

”Good evening my friend, feel the harmony of the night and have a good sleep with your lovely dreams”

And I answered,

“You too, my friend, may our Lord always bless you, thank you…

you never forget me, I’ll never forget”

Author's Note

Written on the same day as my poem "Good Morning", five years ago.
I realized my life was simpler back then. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and powerful words.
“You too, my friend, may our Lord always bless you, thank you…
you never forget me, I’ll never forget”
I like the description of beautiful places and good thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kyle Sky]

Beautiful. The atmosphere is very calm and peaceful while your imagery expresses the loveliness of the night very well. This poem has such a soothing mood and expresses a simple yet admirable theme, the night. Very lovely and admirable literary piece.

[Aprille]

Thanks Kyle. ;)

[Jack Wolfe]

Majestic, its great when one can appreciate the simple wonders of a our world; the serenade crickets, the balmy breeze . . . peace . . . beauty at work.

[Aprille]

Thank you for the kind review. :)

[Aditya kumar]

expressed very nicely :) keep sharing :) it was worth a read

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[yuki]

very sweet and possible a date made you write this? :) it makes me think this is a perfect time for a date setting :) very nice

[Aprille]

haha.. ;) thanks yuki. :)

[Enayet1999]

A rather intriguing poem, your words are nicely expressed, and the scenery is great. May i ask if you can review my work. I'd appreciate that

[Aprille]

Thank you... And of course I can review your works. ;)

[Enayet1999]

Thanks, subject matter is grim

[Sophy Freebirds]

Oohhh ohhh very sweet.. your words nicely express the scenic charm of night. :)

~Sophy

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[John Anderson]

I commend you on how wonderfully expressed I found your words to be. I think you have done an excellent job

[Aprille]

Thank you so much. :)