Good Morning

2009

The sky is sapphire blue

And clouds are cotton-like

At the east, the sun rises with pride.

The birds are chirping,

flying at every side.

Grasses and trees sway with the wind,

then I see my brother showing a good little deed.

“This is such a lovely, beautiful day”, I said.

I am so delighted specially when my cute puppy jump beside me,

greeting me while wagging his not so shaggy tail,

“Hello, Lucky, my best dog and friend, this morning is so wonderful, can I play some tricks with you before our breakfast?” …

And so we did!

Author's Note

I wrote this poem when I was 14 years old but I never let anyone to read it. It is only now that I feel like I want to share...I don't want to change a word because that was a side of me five years ago. I hope you like it. :)

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

I love the ending. Very sweet. And a lovely tribute to a dear friend.

[Aprille]

Thanks KL.

[Eve Ola]

*smiling* its cute Olive i enjoyed from start to end :)

[Aprille]

I'm glad you like it. Thanks. :)

[anne]

a lovely morning......so sweet... :)

[Aprille]

Thank you. :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Awww... so very cute.. i love that fourteen year old olive..and this olive too cause she has opened up.I understand that feeling of not allowing anyone to read your works.Some are personal. :) A lovely description of a beautiful morning :)

~Sophy

[Aprille]

I'm flattered Sophy, (laughs).. Thank you so much. ;)

[priya]

Thats a very sweet poem Olive..you have written beautifully... :)

[Aprille]

Thanks priya. :)

[priya]

my pleasure.. :)

[priya]

my pleasure.. :)