Blue Moon

-the beauty of witnessing a blue moon and the hope to see it together with that one special person-

the sky is filled with brightness,
a little brighter than the usual.
the moon is in his full glory,
~tonight~
overpowering the darkness
that often enslaves the night sky.
inviting, truly splendid
~captivating the crowd..
including myself.
what a wonderful sight~
this so called blue moon.
(the 2nd one this year)
but not even the beauty of the blue moon
can be compared to the splendor of my world
whenever you're with me.
so i'll just stare and wish for now,
when the next blue moon comes~
you'll be here
next to me.

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful! :) I love how your poem talks about the mysteriousness of the moon.You had me at ``the sky is filled with brightness,a little brighter than the usual.'' Your poem flowed wonderfully. Fantastic job! I really enjoyed this! It's absolutely beautiful!

[april13]

wow...thank you for that compliment...

[Rtrt]

A fascinating aspect of real love, when we see something so beautiful but still envision how it would be perfect for them. And with them. Longing for their closeness really evokes emotion in this piece. Thanks again.