S.L.L

S.L.L

A Poem by abby2011

there's a person inside of me
who wants to slip,
running in the rain

and a girl in there,
somewhere,
who wants to fall,
madly in love with a big strong man
crazy about my eyes

and a child,
always, 
chaotic in my curls
giggling at everything,
everyone is funny
and everyone is good

and on the surface
the skin over these life organs
is my reserve
my calm
my adulthood

(but f**k that)

splash
love
laugh



 

© 2011 abby2011


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Nothing short of an anthem. This is quick and dirty, like a sucker punch flash back of elementary summer afternoons, and so my review will merely be a little boys mischievous grin of agreeance and a resounding, "Yeah, f**k that."

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice job abby....keep it up..

and a child,
always,
chaotic in my curls
giggling at everything,
everyone is funny
and everyone is good

love this portrayal of innocence .... :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


If I am learning anything on here Abby; it'a poetry of youth, vitality and optimism. And it's very healthy, it's very natural. Thank you for this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it ~ (you do have nice eyes)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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abby2011
abby2011

Newcastle, Cooks Hill, Australia



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I believe in the power of good intentions. I believe that love and faith conquers bad energy and negativity. I believe that life is a journey which is there to be travelled. I can't sit still and.. more..

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