Butterfly

lameness. getting thoughts out.

Why do I think of you so?

My heart feels free as a bird

yet my mind feels trapped in a cage.

 

I know you have someone now,

and I'm ok with that, what I'm not

ok with is that I'm ignored.

 

I don't understand this hunger.

Why wont you talk to me?

Why can't we have something special?

 

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

I feel you on this piece
I hate being ignored
especially when you have
done nothing bad towards
that person

Great Poem

Orlando Murcia

[wicked.wanderer]

A tad prose-y at the beginning, with cliche metaphors.
But I like it.
Who's it about?