Pictures of you

A little something cause I was bored

Everytime I close my eyes
You're all that I see
You're not here to hear my cries
The image of you haunts me

You're the only one I want
No one else but you
Just to hold you once again
There is nothing I would not do

Whenever I close my eyes
I see you clear as day
Laying down silently I cry
The prices ny heart must pay

I put your pictures away
To feel less lonely
But still every passing day
I lay here feeling miserably

Reviews

[Michael V]

The flow to start was good, setting the scene, the mood, the pain. But as you move on you lose it a bit almost like you forced a ending. Regardless i enjoyed it.